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Comments for 'Shadows of Archon II (part 15) -Remembering the Master Chief' |
Anonymous
10:12 pm | October 3, 2002
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el_halo_diablo
2:18 am | September 22, 2002
its pretty fucking annoying. Why do you waste your time impersonating someone? you really have no life do you?
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Spartan415 (mm
11:45 am | September 21, 2002
very childish it seems
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Knightmare(MM
8:22 pm | September 20, 2002
I agree...
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Sarge
10:44 am | September 20, 2002
The acts of this impersonator are rather childish.
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Wado
1:37 am | September 20, 2002
IMPERSONATOR? Oh man, not again.
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ERrr... bug off!
1:08 am | September 20, 2002
Hey, who the heck is using my name AGAIN!?
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Wado
10:57 pm | September 19, 2002
Thanks for the comment Knightmare. Strange, it sounds so familiar, deju vu. I can't seem to put my finger on it...lol
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knightmare (mm
10:46 pm | September 19, 2002
Good points PanZer. If this helps the story be less confusing, this was a chapter of two parts... The first part was Cat's story of how the Archonian sleepers came about with some background on Forerunners and how Archons think (hence the reference to the uniforms, red and green was intended to be a comparison of the difference on how humans view things compared to Archons). It is established way back in the first chapter of Return of the Archons that the Archons can't think using logic and statistics, they only see patterns in nature, threads of life is another way to look at it. The second section consisted of three separate "visions": Val's, Cat's, and the Lady's. All three visions were happening simultaneously, but I wrote them sequentially. BTW to MC fans, the number of living MCs in this story is equal to 1/3. thanks
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el_halo_diablo
9:59 pm | September 19, 2002
nicie nicie nicie (wait...is nicie even a word?)
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Nike
8:54 pm | September 19, 2002
Hey, Wado. YThis part is pretty good. Oh yeah, almost forgot...I may not be posting for awhile because I'm either playing my Xbox or on a sort of vacation, I guess.
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Wado
8:04 pm | September 19, 2002
Good points PanZer. If this helps the story be less confusing, this was a chapter of two parts...The first part was Cat's story of how the Archonian sleepers came about with some background on Forerunners and how Archons think (hence the reference to the uniforms, red and green was intended to be a comparison of the difference on how humans view things compared to Archons). It is established way back in the first chapter of Return of the Archons that the Archons can't think using logic and statistics, they only see patterns in nature, threads of life is another way to look at it. The second section consisted of three separate "visions": Val's, Cat's, and the Lady's. All three visions were happening simultaneously, but I wrote them sequentially. BTW to MC fans, the number of living MCs in this story is equal to 1/3.
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PanZer
7:15 pm | September 19, 2002
Once again, another strange chapter. A couple parts seemed a little random (ex: the uniforms, red and green section) A couple paragraphs seemed just a little out of place, or as my teacher would say, "It doesn't have parallel structure!" Lol. Good though. Should be interesting.
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