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Comments for 'As Far As I Could See' |
teemus
12:27 pm | March 9, 2004
I also lost intrest after the first few lines. But keep it up, youll get better.
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Thomas Harper
1:05 am | March 9, 2004
thanks guys. =:) i was a little un sure if i should post it or not but o well here it is.
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CoLd BlooDed
11:59 pm | March 8, 2004
I didn't really like it either, but since it was your first I'll chalk that up to the n00bism.
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Thomas Harper
11:12 pm | March 8, 2004
yea i no it was just something new that i thought i would try. thanks.
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Solidus Snake
10:25 pm | March 8, 2004
Didn't like it, why. Didn't really flow or rhyme, plus it wasn't interesting....
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Thomas Harper
9:47 pm | March 8, 2004
thanks ToFu. yea i no it was my first halo poem so i thought that i would just try it.
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ToFu
8:26 pm | March 8, 2004
No offense but ur poem did'nt interest me...Im sorry, it sounded more like a person telling a story...instead of a poem. But keep writing...
Until then Write on brother, write on...
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Thomas Harper
1:30 pm | March 8, 2004
oops i forgot to put i and /i llke this [i] and [/i] sorry!=:)
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