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			Walker  
11:21 pm | January 22, 2004 
			Feet First Into Hell!
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			Helljumper  
7:34 pm | January 22, 2004 
			That was really good. No complaints on my part. I assume that by SF you mean Special Forces so those marines must have been Orbital Drop Shock Troops. YOu know that makes me happy.
  Helljumper first to rise, last to fall Helljumpers do it all
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			The Scribe  
5:42 pm | January 21, 2004 
			Thanks for commenting, Hikaru.  I know that Elites don't usually die that easily, but the first two Elites killed in the story, since they hadn't spotted the Marines yet, hadn't had a chance to activate their shields.  But the last set, yes that was a mistake on my part.  Thanks and keep reading.
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			Hikaru-119  
1:12 pm | January 21, 2004 
			The Elites seemed to have died rather easilly from just two rifle shots. Generally unless they are both successful head shots Elites can take two to four shots each. Just so you know. Also I like the concept for the storm. Except the story seemed a bit short in length.
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