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 Comments for 'Halo Cataclysm:  The Nexus  (Chapter 001)'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Riley 217  
8:42 pm | July 14, 2004 
			I like where is the rest? Good story.
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			Lt. Wolf  
3:48 pm | June 17, 2004 
			I read it a second time,and your writing style is great in my opinion. Your better thhan the guy who wrote Halo: The Flood,though it might be because you have the Homeworld world with yours.Spelling is no big deal to me,unless Guraunt is supposed to be grunt.Anyway, you damn well better continue this for awhile.Its a good story
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			INDUSTRIAL_aVATAR  
1:37 am | June 17, 2004 
			man, this stuff is G-R-E-A-T!!!!! the homeworld base rocks!
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			Lt. Wolf  
9:59 pm | June 15, 2004 
			I didnt read it at first,I thought it would be boring.But man, it.is.GREAT!You should seriously think of writing novels,in your spare time at least.
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			Lt. Wolf  
7:51 pm | June 14, 2004 
			Yes, Homeworld was great,just wasnt nearly as good as its successor, Homeworld Cataclysm, Homeworld2 isnt that good.Did you get the name of the fic from Homeworld Cataclysm?
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			Black Knight  
11:24 am | June 14, 2004 
			Oh! Great story Snake! Oh and by the way,did you get that name from "Metal Gear Solid"?! I love that game!!!!
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			Black Knight  
11:15 am | June 14, 2004 
			WOW! That guy twinkie must have ticked you guys OFF! That guy inpersonated me too!!!! And Im just a newbie,(not gonna advertise my stories though)! Im glad he's gone! He caused too much crap to happen! But now,the dust can settle,and we can live in peace my friends!!! LETS PARTY!!!
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			Mainevent  
11:24 am | June 13, 2004 
			For all of you participating in the Fan Fiction Contest, remember that tomorrow is the last day to get your entry in.
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			Snake Solid 117  
4:42 am | June 13, 2004 
			Thanks for the support.  Although I personally could have done without all the swearing, i appreciate it.  I used the name 'Jeff Graham' as my old pen name, which also happens top be my real name.  Anywho, i will post the next chapter in about a week.  Thanks again, i was kind of worried what kind of responses i'd get.
  To 'Lt. Wolf':  Home World was a an excellent game.  It helped inspire me to write this.
  To 'White Grunt':  I just came up with the name, i don't care much for Starcraft.  The name also fit well for the first chapte might agree if you know the definition.
  Thanks again.
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			romac1991  
3:57 am | June 13, 2004 
			never mind, i found it
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			romac1991  
3:48 am | June 13, 2004 
			hey main, do you have a hotmail address, if not what is your e-mail address?
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			343 Salty Beans  
1:14 am | June 13, 2004 
			Oh, and sorry. Great story, man. Makes my fanfics look like crap on a stick (0ven-toasted and served with butter and sour cream). I love the storyline, I'll definitely be following this series.
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			Guardian  
12:52 pm | June 12, 2004 
			i'm with Nick Kang, and also write more!
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			Helljumper  
11:47 am | June 12, 2004 
			I don't get it
  ODST
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			Gallagher  
4:48 am | June 12, 2004 
			awesome dude. ide by the book if it was. keep up the good work.
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			Mainevent  
3:25 am | June 12, 2004 
			And if I didn't like the first part, I won't read the second.
  And jesus what's up with people like this these dayS?
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			Jeremy  
6:27 pm | June 11, 2004 
			Wow. This seems like it is going to be awesome. I would have liked to see more of a cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. 
  But, overall it is awesome.
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			white grunt  
5:42 pm | June 11, 2004 
			great story, one question where did u get Nexus from? starcratf?
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			Wiley  
5:31 pm | June 11, 2004 
			Interestin...to say the least. I'll be following this series
  9/10
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			Lt. Wolf  
5:13 pm | June 11, 2004 
			Sounds kinda like the game Homeworld.
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			FootballPlayer  
3:57 pm | June 11, 2004 
			More! More! Awesome story.
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