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			FDJ- BLACK TITAN  
12:14 pm | June 18, 2004 
			whats with the random question marks? you suck son.
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			Anonymous  
11:00 am | April 24, 2004 
			opps
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			Mr lucky  
10:55 pm | April 23, 2004 
			give suggestions to make my stories better better
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			Mr lucky  
10:55 pm | April 23, 2004 
			give suggestions to make my stories better
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			Mr lucky  
2:36 am | April 23, 2004 
			well the others are all ready posted but I will fix the next one. but give me any feed back you can and did any go one in the story it's gets better the frist 4 will only set up the story line
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			Mainevent  
1:10 am | April 23, 2004 
			God!
  I wish someone could get Wu to put a link (that opens up in a new window) on the submission page that told you how to use the code!
  That would be awesome wouldn't it?
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			Mr lucky  
12:18 am | April 23, 2004 
			had to be broken apart
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			The Silver Spartan  
12:09 am | April 23, 2004 
			Well, about the Pseudocode, you would have learned about it if you would have read the Explanation page first, but you didn't so here it is:
  1.) To indent a paragraph or line, you type: [Indent] and than the text afterward.
  2.) To put a block or a few words in italics, you type: [I]and than the text you wan't italicized in here[/I]
  3.) To put a block or a few words in bold, you type: [B]and than the text you wan't to be bold in here[/B]
  4.) To put in a Horizontal Rule (A horizontal line across the page) you type: [HR]  however If you want a hr and than an indented piece of text you must type the hr before the indent. A hr is usually used when you shift from one person's Point Of View (P.O.V) to the next.
  Sry I was so critacal erlier, my first story looked just like yours!
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			Mr lucky  
10:10 pm | April 22, 2004 
			sorry they were already typed at once so it to be broken apart. also it was alredy typed with apostrophes and Quotes i tryed to get rid of them all.  and for a thrid thing I'm a n00b so i don't know how to indent or it would have been better
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			Mainevent  
9:39 pm | April 22, 2004 
			I believe the ? for ' is a copy/paste error.  I've had it happen to me before on other sites.
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			Nick Kang  
9:21 pm | April 22, 2004 
			SPAM!  Nick Kang no like Spam!  You are getting Nick Kang angry!  You will not like Nick Kang when he's angry!  Nick Kang smash!
  Best wishes, NK
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			The Silver Spartan  
9:09 pm | April 22, 2004 
			Umm... Well, here?s some tips for you, read the "read this before submitting fiction page" otherwise people WILL flame you. And please do us all a favor and type this in a word prosessor and copy and paste it onto the form. I have a sinking feeling that you typed this all on the submission form. And lastly DON?T SPAM!!!! In other words don't submit three storys at once!!! People will attack you!! If you think I am being harsh wait until Hawk7886 reads this...
  PS: Don?t use a question mark for an apostrophe ok? In other words Don?t should be: Don't, so Don't do it!!!
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