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Comments for 'Another (Part 2)' |
Mr Bill
1:09 am | November 21, 2003
http://halo.bungie.org/story/for.timeline.html
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Hawk7886
10:39 pm | November 20, 2003
Very cool.
Besides the Pelicans, what does this have to do with Halo?
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Mr Bill
2:57 am | November 20, 2003
Well, naturally, that post was a mistake. That was supposed to be me talking to Steele.
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Steele:
2:55 am | November 20, 2003
Yes indeed you are correct. I just got tired of writing stories with annoying male leads.
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Steele
2:33 am | November 20, 2003
Yeah, man, you can really write.
If I'm not mistaken the main character in Chance was a female also. Right?
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Mr Bill
1:14 am | November 20, 2003
Wado:
Thankyou once again for your comments during writing this, but I had an idea in mind- and that's the way it's gotta be.
:-)
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Wado
11:05 pm | November 19, 2003
Yes, Mr. Bill is back.
Excellent story *tips hat*
I still think Tanya should not have surrendered though. ;)
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Mr Bill
8:51 pm | November 19, 2003
Steve Ollet et al: No I have not been in the service, but I thank you for the flatterying replies.I will attempt to improve gramatical/spelling erros next time around.
Once more, thank you for your replies.
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Jillybean
5:12 pm | November 19, 2003
There's a female lead in my fic too - the Chief is used for gratuitous sex . . . hmm.
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Steve Ollett
3:15 pm | November 19, 2003
It's good to see that there is a female character taking the lead too, and not just there for gratuitious sexual inuendos. (Damn, just gave away the gist of the next installment of my 'Marooned' series!)
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Jillybean
12:58 pm | November 19, 2003
I agree with Steve - just a few wee spelling mistake but the rest was marvellous. I liked how tanya stared into space instead of replying - nice touch.
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Steve Ollett
12:49 pm | November 19, 2003
Another great piece, you really know what you are writing about - have you been in the services?
Only a couple of little niggley spelling/grammatical errors, but excellent otherwise.
Rgds,
Steve.
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