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Comments for 'Rebirth - Falling Stars' |
Jinkaiden-XI
9:18 pm | May 16, 2004
Loving every addition. It's been awhile since I've been able to come here (my AOL account was terminated and I am currently operating under another modem. And who's this negative-Kang? 'Faget'...haven't laughed at something like that since somebody spelled 'bisexual' wrong. Here's to Rebirth and continuing glory. Cheers.
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Ishkabibbl
10:03 pm | April 26, 2004
Oh yeah, put me to shame again lol, awesome series (and all the lead up ones before)
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Ishkabibbl
11:49 am | April 26, 2004
Shadow and Shade, I'd laugh so hard if they're related.
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Knightmare(MM
9:14 pm | April 25, 2004
Snuggle is also a She.
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Yeti
8:58 pm | April 25, 2004
Wow, i know a guy/girl on halo multiplayer going by the name Shade. And about the story, very good, and why has no-one commented on the grunt, ''snuggle''. he sounds like Yap-Yap, except cuter
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MT
8:09 pm | April 25, 2004
Ah, I mistaken the full stop for a comma. I thought Shade was a place name until the revelation of the true name at the end.
Sorry for that.
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Knightmare(MM
2:35 pm | April 25, 2004
Thank you. Jaeden'Seul however, is not the one in pain. That would be Shade.
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Knightmare(MM
11:08 am | April 25, 2004
Thank you for the comments, as to have created them you have generously given your time and consideration. Please note that this is a series, not a single story.
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MT
7:03 am | April 25, 2004
A female Covenant? My, I believe this is a first. Please correct me if I am wrong.
A perfect sense of ambiguity, and lovely character build. Really got into Jaeden'Seul and her pain.
Extremely good descriptives which were a joy to read, and frankly, really professional. Actually, maybe they are a bit too long? Not that I should criticize others for writing too much... hehe.
Your use of code should be better, though. Indents and double line spaces between sections. Some of the structure should have been better, and the bits with brackets really dampened a otherwise shadowy mood. It was very much like some fantasy stories about assasins and plots.
A mysterious story, which I very much look forward to reading further.
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Master_Chief189
5:02 pm | April 24, 2004
Good story.
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Nick Kang
1:15 pm | April 24, 2004
To other Nick Kang: Your favorite WWII fighter plane is the Mustang. Am I right?
NK
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Nick Kang
1:12 pm | April 24, 2004
ur story is horrible i cant believe you wrote it! Dumb Faget
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