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Comments for 'Buried Treasure(7)' |
HEYGIRLWHATUP
5:13 pm | August 12, 2003
ACTUALLY I CHECKED IT TO SEE IF ANYTHING NEW WAS UP TODAY, THE 12TH. YOUR STUFF IS GOOD.
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Frensa Geran
4:41 am | August 10, 2003
I doubt anyone is checking this comments area anymore, but I wanted to apologize for not continuing it. I have been hard at work on a new project that will take Buried Treasure time.
But be not concerned, this new one is going to make you smile.
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Jamirus99
1:21 am | August 5, 2003
Wiley, why do you have to make comments like that? I post comments because some people fan fic's SUCK. Frensa's don't, so I don't complain. Read my fic Wiley, I'd love to hear what you say.
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Frensa Geran
11:17 am | July 31, 2003
Wow.... I'm really really good. *Cue bad to the bone song*
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Taze
5:02 am | July 31, 2003
this is one of the best story here,good story line, no grammer problem and great suspence.10/10
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Agent Shade
4:21 am | July 31, 2003
*shudders* rap music...
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Frensa Geran
2:02 am | July 31, 2003
Of course not, I obviously listen to rap. That won't degrade my reputation.... will it? ;)
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Heh, mocking people is fun.
1:44 am | July 31, 2003
:-)
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Ishkabibbl
1:42 am | July 31, 2003
Well if you listen to that song I magicly lose all respect of you as an author.
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Wiley
7:46 pm | July 30, 2003
This just hit me: Jamarius and Hawk found a story they can't criticize. How the frick did this happen? Something isn't right here...
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Wiley
7:44 pm | July 30, 2003
...People are obsessed...
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Frensa Geran
6:05 pm | July 30, 2003
== John looked intently for a working chronometer. He took some of the power of his suit, and placed it in the mainframe. Lights lit up barely, and the chronometer what readable:
3:43 PM Friday June 7th, 3652
"June 7th, 3652... No. It can't be." ==
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Ishkabibbl
4:17 pm | July 30, 2003
I'm too lazy to check but is that the real date or the date in the story?
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Frensa Geran
3:41 pm | July 30, 2003
Yeah, on July 7th at 3:43 (wink) PM.
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Wiley K.
12:11 pm | July 30, 2003
Wow, he comes back in the 7th chapter. Weird.
9.5/10
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Jamirus99
8:29 pm | July 29, 2003
LOL Frensa
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Ishkabibbl
5:58 pm | July 29, 2003
Frensa, you always put a 'special' twist into your words, novlelized bitch, hahahahaha.
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turbus
4:01 pm | July 29, 2003
Yes! 9/10. Finally! MC's gonna finally kick some ass again! The suspense as always is there, and in full force. keep writing!
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'Nosolee
11:33 am | July 29, 2003
"Master Chief Sir! Good to see you!" 10/10
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Hawk7886
3:43 am | July 29, 2003
"The Prophet smiled at the idea, still speaking to her Jackal assistant." Her assistant? Very nice! I wasn't expecting that. Absolutely wonderful story going on, I love the direction you are taking this. 11/10 Nothing to complain on here.
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Frensa Geran
3:30 am | July 29, 2003
The way I see it Jamirus, until the game comes out, I can do whatever the hell I want to 'ol Chiefy here. He's my nolvelized bitch. :)
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Agent Shade
2:18 am | July 29, 2003
"Whoa! He's taller than I thought, and better looking too" 10/10
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Jamirus99
2:17 am | July 29, 2003
Finally getting rolling here.... ;)
You know Frensa, now that you've worked out the spelling and stuff, there's NOTHING to complain about. Excellent doesn't begin to describe this series; although I will admit I am a bit disappointed with how you're working the timeline here: its now like an "alternate" Halo 2 universe.
Oh well, makes sense, since we know Chiefy won't be losing in that one. ;)
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scope
1:26 am | July 29, 2003
8.5/10 I love this. Its so sad, everyone deserves a first kiss. If u are gonna kill her off have her kiss the elite. Just so she can die in peace. If you arnt killing her off and MC saves her, have her kiss MC. Its the perfect love story.
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