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 Comments for 'Hells bells: part one oni secret'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			CoLd BlooDed  
2:00 pm | May 12, 2004 
			...and extremely unnessecary.  Seriously, Silver Spartan, think before you type.  That wasn't cool.
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			Spartan81388  
10:44 pm | May 11, 2004 
			Ewww! That is just plain nasty.
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			The Silver Spartan  
11:42 am | May 10, 2004 
			WHAT THE FUCK!!! Chapter 4 of my series is called guess, HELLS BELLS! Did you not read the instructions where it said to search for other titles with the same name!!! YOU MOTHER FUCKING DICK SUCKING CHODE HUMPING VIBRATER USING FAGGOT!!!
  The Silver Spartan
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			Nick Kang  
8:15 pm | May 8, 2004 
			noooo *points gun 2 hed and puls triger* uh im ded
  nk
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			Solidus Snake  
7:44 pm | May 8, 2004 
			Nick Kang, you are a n00b, :p
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			Nick Kang  
3:27 pm | May 8, 2004 
			*and whimpers*
  NK
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			Nick Kang  
2:29 pm | May 8, 2004 
			Uggghhh...seizure!  Seizure!  They're everywhere!  The friggin n00bs are EVERYWHERE!!!!!  I can't take it anymore!  Bad grammar...horrible punctuation...no commas!  My brain!  It burns!  My eyes are melting in their sockets!   *curls up in fetal position*
  NK
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			TGC  
11:29 am | May 8, 2004 
			Please let this be a cruel, boring joke!
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			Slayer Boi  
10:03 am | May 8, 2004 
			Oh god!!!! I HATE YOU FISH!!!!!! you give anything with the word fish in it a bad name!!! Where do u live! i will personally come and stick a shottie up ur arse and blow u 2 Shit! U SUCK BITCH!!!!!!!
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			Helljumper  
1:21 am | May 8, 2004 
			yea what they said, you have a good idea here but you need better structure, use the code better, and use quotation marks for what people say and use each line of speech as a new paragraph. Don't skip ahead of stuff, use details \\ODST
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			No one  
6:52 pm | May 7, 2004 
			Follow wat dark-nite said dummy. QUOTATION MARKS!!!
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			Dark-NiTe  
1:44 pm | May 7, 2004 
			They're called quotation marks. use them.  I stopped reading about 10 sentences in and skipped to the end, which i realized i should've just left.
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