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Comments for 'Its Just One of Those Days (Prologue: 03)' |
scope
9:45 pm | August 11, 2003
this story is ok
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Alpha Lance
5:33 am | July 27, 2003
That out of Halo The Flood.One word copycat.
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Kaboose29 (a.k.a. Spookybanana29)
2:38 pm | July 22, 2003
Great Story...but isn't Johnson Sarge?
I think taht in the Fall of Reach and The Flood, the "Sarge" is actaully Sergeant Johnson...
They only came up with the name Sarge as a nickname for Sergeant Johnson in the game...i think...lol
Kaboose29
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Elfster
6:23 pm | July 21, 2003
uhhh... not sure what your talking about.
the "he" At the beginning was Keyes, in the Covenant brig thing... then the next POV it was Master Cheif, in the third POV it was a Covenant Jackal... there was one point where they were using the reverse triangle and I didnt put a line between the POVs, but I did paragraph them, the one where "he" sticks a plasma grenade to himself and went down kamikaze style was a Covenant Elite. although I usually try to refer to Covenant's as their names (Elites, Grunts, etc) or It's instead of he's just so its not confused. Besides, he dont even know if the Covenant have he's... they might all be gay =P
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Steele
3:21 pm | July 21, 2003
"You're really not very good with that thing are you?"
Pretty good. 9/10. I must say; In the second little horizontal rule thingy-ma-bob who was 'he?'
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Agent Shade
3:29 am | July 21, 2003
oh boy, i need practise with this fighting...shoots***
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Elfster
3:29 am | July 21, 2003
woot... my first real comment on this chapter...
I usually get alot more comments than this =( the anon one was from me, I was playing around to see what would happen if I didnt put in a name, and so I rated my own story.
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Agent Shade
3:27 am | July 21, 2003
KILL ELFSTER
*raises sniper rifle and shots him in head*
STORY: 9/10 (Good job, now you must die hehe)
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Vege7a
1:57 am | July 21, 2003
Man, that was tight! I love your stories. Keep 'em coming! :]
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Anonymous
8:47 pm | July 20, 2003
8/10
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