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			Nightblade  
3:48 pm | July 11, 2003 
			Shu up Elfster
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			Elfster  
3:21 am | July 9, 2003 
			and I obviously dont know how to spell "word" lol
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			Elfster  
9:34 pm | July 8, 2003 
			And come to think of it, what kind of name is FROMB? It cracks me up to see that idiots like you are telling people they need different names when you don't even have one that makes sense either, aside from that, although I'd just LOVE to cuss you out, I think he has a right to share his opinion. He also has a right to go back to school and atleast get a GED because he obviously doesnt know the meaning of the world "plot"
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			Elfster  
9:32 pm | July 8, 2003 
			He just isn't posting any fan fics because he knows his are even worse. im behind valk all the way.
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			BlackValkyire  
6:02 am | July 8, 2003 
			FBOMB Shut your mouth You have no right to give me your crap I'd like to see YOUR stories...oh wait there are non. Don't give me crap, I don't see anything of yours, and I'd like to see you do better. Until then...
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			FBOMB  
10:39 pm | July 7, 2003 
			yeah not only do you need a different title, but really its like most of these other stories, its just a bunch of stuff that happens no real plot, climax, or exciting aspects to it.  I'd rather be actually playing Halo
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			LordofDestruction  
9:03 pm | July 7, 2003 
			One word, [indent]! The story looked like on big paragraph. At least leave another line inbetween paragraphs. 7/10
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			pooman  
7:14 pm | July 7, 2003 
			u need a diffrent title
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			Elfster  
2:04 am | July 7, 2003 
			Dude, seriously, what kind of crap was THAT?
  Just kidding ! :)
  Im not quite sure it was better than the first one but it puts up a helluva fight. Keep up the good work!
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