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 Comments for 'A Story of Betrayal, Part 1: The Return Home'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			BlackGhost  
4:26 am | April 25, 2004 
			Sorry double post.
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			BlackGhost  
4:24 am | April 25, 2004 
			I liked it. I especially liked the Rick James. :) I'm assuming you got that from the Chappele's (sp) Show. Anyways, keep up the good work.
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			BlackGhost  
4:24 am | April 25, 2004 
			I liked it. I especially liked the Rick James. :) I'm assuming you got that from the Chappele's (sp) Show. Anyways, keep up the good work.
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			Master_Chief189  
5:22 pm | April 24, 2004 
			Good story. Just separate the dialog.
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			The REAL Nick Kang  
3:00 pm | April 24, 2004 
			It seems like you didn't pay much attention to H: FS(if you read it at all).  Just because Halo is 04, that doesn't mean there are only three more.  Think about it.  There is a 0 before the 4.  That means there are at least 10 Halos.  And two men destroyed the two Covie fleets.  Not one.  Then, Cortana uploaded all of the Covenant technologies into her database, so destroying the Covie flagship wouldn't matter(i think.).
  NK
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			The REAL Nick Kang  
1:24 pm | April 24, 2004 
			That isn't me!  It's my friend Shawn.
  NK
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			Nick Kang  
1:14 pm | April 24, 2004 
			ur story is horrible i cant believe you wrote it! Dumb Faget
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