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Comments for 'Shadows of Archon (part 2) - The Return' |
Wado
7:23 pm | August 12, 2002
New stuffs posted now.
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Wado
6:25 pm | August 12, 2002
lol... Thanks, I was feeling a little bummed out that people didn't seem to enjoy my stuff as much as I wanted. I enjoyed writing it, thought it was better than it was. I've already submitted the next two parts but I hear there is a backlog so I'm waiting to see them posted. I hope these work out better. My SA first two parts were background for the stuff I'm introducing in the new parts. I think it will help make them better because I really start to hit the Science-Fiction side hard.
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el_halo_diablo
6:14 pm | August 12, 2002
aww i wanted a SA performance: "everyone went into battle and BOOM everyone died!"...."um... the end"
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Wado
7:10 pm | August 10, 2002
Okay, next one will have less SA.
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Nike
3:56 pm | August 10, 2002
Not SO much action that it SA. SA stands for "sucks ass."
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Wado
11:45 am | August 10, 2002
I'm starting to see a pattern here. Okay, next ones going to be more action. Full steam ahead.
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Nike
11:17 am | August 10, 2002
Kinda slow but it'll pass. Good but KINDA slow.
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MasterChief21
7:01 pm | August 9, 2002
Its pretty good so far, a little slow to start but im sure that will change. Keep up the good work.
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Wado
3:34 pm | August 9, 2002
lol... as yourself, I meant: "Instead, ASK yourself, how does CBN seem to know everything?" Well that's all that I have to say for now -- really this time.
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Wado
3:09 pm | August 9, 2002
Well I hope I don't write so lousy that no one wants to read the story anymore -- Especially you guys. It means a lot to me when you add comments for my stories. In my mind the difference between this series and the Return of the Archons series is that in Return I never intended to write past the adventures inside the web of Medusa so everything was fast and intense, descriptions bigger than life, tragedies burned deep in the heart, etc. On the other hand, Shadows is intended to be a book so there's going to be a little more filler between the intense parts. The filler will be to introduce new characters, places, and concepts that might be used later. There's going to be a lot of stuff that won't be explained or make much sense until much later in the series, and then, if I do it right, it will make perfect sense (you can pat yourself on the back if you guessed it ahead of time). And Arch, as for the CBN (Covenant Broadcasting Network), you're right that Archons have something to do with it, but no they haven't taken it over. Instead, as yourself, how does CBN seem to know everything? Well that's all that I have to say for now. Thanks.
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Father Sarge
3:02 pm | August 9, 2002
Hey Another thing this is a good story no unessecary swearing *cough* Arch *cough*. Father Sarge is pleaed with this one.
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Sarge
3:02 pm | August 9, 2002
Hmmm I don't know this ones good but I think your other serious might have been better. But this one is great to so far so don't get me wrong.
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Arch
2:35 pm | August 9, 2002
why am i the first to post? anyways, i like what you're doing, but i must say that the intros with the CBS is kinda wierd. Has it been taken over by Archons? lol anyways, it's different, but its good.
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