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			The Scribe  
6:57 pm | July 27, 2003 
			To Wiley K: Yeah?  Well screw YA!
  Ha ha, I'm just kiddin you, bud.  In the next chapter, there'll be some of those characters.  And thanks for the advice.  I'll use that idea in all of my stories.
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			Wiley K  
10:15 pm | July 26, 2003 
			Nobody in this story lasts long. Maybe if you put in someone that lasts for more than a few paragraphs (aside from the MC). Other than that, it is an awsome story. 9.5/10 for the whole thing.
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			alpal  
8:51 am | July 26, 2003 
			this is really cool like homocide said i hope theyll put this in the halo2 story
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			The Scribe  
6:52 pm | July 25, 2003 
			Hey, ??? and homocide, thanks a lot for your comments.  Hey, I hope Halo 2 is like this also.  And by the way, Grunts do take crap from Elites.  If read one of the Halo novels, you'll find out.
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			The Scribe  
6:52 pm | July 25, 2003 
			I've only done this series, so you can read all of the prequels to this by clicking on "more by this author".  I haven't written any other series, so its the only one on there.
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			homcide  
8:02 am | July 25, 2003 
			this is great i hope halo 2 is just like what youll wrote do grunts really take shit frome elite ecellent you should work for bungie man you rock i hpoe bungie uses this story
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			???  
8:02 am | July 25, 2003 
			i love these stories keep up good workpepole human power
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