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Comments for 'Longsword R: Desperation, Part Two' |
343 Salty Beans
9:05 pm | June 27, 2004
Kick. Ass.
The description of the Prophet seemed directly from H:tF, though.
343SB
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thedarkfire
1:48 am | June 26, 2004
wonderful again..trully wonderful
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Kaizen
12:09 pm | June 25, 2004
Great story man. One of the best I've read.
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Sterfrye36
11:26 am | June 25, 2004
What about my story!?
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Wado
11:24 am | June 25, 2004
I might finish Eternal Sunder...might. If people want me to.
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Wiley
3:45 am | June 25, 2004
Wado..I vote you finish it. It was one of the things that kept me around here, especially during the n00bslide.
I STILL havn't gotten arond to finishing your Archon series.....and ive been reading for awhile.
Oh, and we need more of the Dark Halo stories, especially the first one. I love having the sh1t scared outta me...and the first Dark Halo did that VERY well. Just remember, Travis was here. I swear to god...it was like 2 in the morning and storming when I read it first. I didnt go to bed. At all. I hadn't been that scared since The Exorcist, and it takes a LOT to scare me.
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FootballPlayer
2:51 am | June 25, 2004
Very very very good. If you wrote professionally, I would eagerly await your stuff.
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Wado
12:56 am | June 25, 2004
Yes, about your story. Seems to be nearly the same level as Steeles stuff. Im impressed at your level of writing and detail. Keep it up.
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Wiley
6:05 pm | June 24, 2004
Steele! you have heard our call! Its great to have you back!
What is going on...all the vets are returning...now all we need are H_K, Dispraiser, and El_Halo_Diablo.
Hah! I love it!
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Sterfrye36
5:00 pm | June 24, 2004
Which I don't really have a problem with.
*Tears hair out* WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!
Thanks. I feel better now.
And the green with envy thing was a joke. Maybe you and I should co-write this...What do you think? The two best space combat writers out there, huh?
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Sterfrye36
4:57 pm | June 24, 2004
Heh. Thanks, Steele. That means a lot comin' from you. Wiley still thinks that "In Defense of Earth" is better, though.
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Dave Luck
4:17 pm | June 24, 2004
Awesome Excellent!
This story was so tense I was standing on my head at one point.
Very professional. I can't complain! Remember that time when you wrote that 'Fan fiction for Idiots?' This looked a billion times better.
There's only one problem - with all the fanfics.
After leafing through all the stories in the archives, I realized that the writing needs something more -
SYMBOLISM
PHILOSOPHICAL VALUES
SATIRE
Add those three, and you will be not only a champion of Halo fanfic, but also a champion of world writing.
- Dave
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Nick Kang
2:29 pm | June 24, 2004
I think I see where this is going...
Excellent!
NK
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Steele
12:47 pm | June 24, 2004
It's been a while, I've been busy but I have returned and planning to write a story. Wado and I, MIGHT co-write a story. Straight to the point I haven't been writing but I have been reading comments. I believe on Sterfrye's last Longsward R story, he said I would be green with envy of his story. Well just let me say I'm impressed at your level of skill, very professional.
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Wiley
12:43 pm | June 24, 2004
*applause*
Bravo, bravo!
9.7/10
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