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			Hikaru--119  
9:54 pm | February 9, 2003 
			D-day is an alright idea, but there is a bit of a problem. What crazy son of a be-atch would send in only two drop ships for an invasion force? Only an idiot would send his men to their deaths that way. Especially when it is up against that many Covenant. Still it is good for your first one I suppose. Keep writing and give the UNSC a chance when making an invasion story.
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			Shadow Spartan  
2:44 am | January 29, 2003 
			This is my first time writing fan fiction. I realize D-Day has been done before, but I felt that this would be kind of a kool idea. A past horrific event taking place in the future. Dunno how many other parts I will have, but the second one is already in. Thanks
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			Pilot 415  
9:04 pm | January 28, 2003 
			prettty good story a few typeos but thats to be expected.
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			James  
3:13 pm | January 28, 2003 
			dude, get an original idea please, D-day has been done already, re do it like name it somthing else and equate it to D-day otherwise it was an ok story, a bit sktechy but it still flows well, keep it up
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