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Comments for 'Discovery of an Enemy, Epilogue' |
russ687
11:47 am | July 16, 2004
Cold Blooded, I know you're are reading this series so I thought I'd beat you to the ending.
Nobody checks old posts, but I sure do appreciate you going over it and leaving something for me to remember; that takes dedication.
So I hope you enjoyed this series, and feel free to tell me how bad I'm doing in the future!
Oh yeah, sorry if its sooo long, but I don't write short stories (at least not yet).
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CoLd BlooDed
11:11 am | July 16, 2004
Amazing series, russ, I hope you do choose to follow through with a series with Helljumper. You guys will certainly deliver with all your military knowledge. ;)
This epilogue was insane, will he be having more visions in the future? I certainly hope so. Great series, again, russ, and keep it up. You've got a gift.
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russ687
5:00 am | July 16, 2004
What? How? Noooo....!
Wait, nobody checks old posts. Who cares? :)
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CoLd BlooDed
2:08 am | July 16, 2004
Hahahaha, I beat you!
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Dave Luck
5:40 pm | July 12, 2004
Very tragic ending. I like that in a story, in a weird, twisted, 'Dave Luck' Kinda way.
- Dave.
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Jessica
8:24 am | July 12, 2004
Veeeeeeery Veeeeeeeeeery Good...^.^
J3$$!
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russ687
1:19 am | July 12, 2004
Also, if you Helljupmer, or anyone, wants to contact me, MSN Instant Messanger is what I have. I'd be glad to talk to any of you about comments or stories or theroies in Halo...whatever. If you want to argue (in good nature) about anything, feel free. I love doing stuff like that (if you havent noticed).
russ687@hotmail.com
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Snowy Duck
5:22 am | July 11, 2004
I have got to say, this is THE best story I have read, I'm not saying there arn't better, I am just saying this is the best story that I've read. It has great plot, a story line worth following, and it just stuck into my mind. Every time I looked at the fan fiction updates, I looked for this series. I commend you for not only finishing a actual story, but a good one at that. I will expect/wish for either a new story or a sequel - just try not to get any of those horror movie sequal types ;)
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russ687
4:17 am | July 11, 2004
Helljumper: You know my email. Get in contact with me via that and we can arragne things from there (I'm not very fond of the post, re-post method of communcating).
Oh yeah, next series will be out soon, but I have one question: should the paragraphs and dialogue be sperated with a single spacing or not? Like this:
Joe was a good guy.
"I Liked the movie Dodgeball," he said.
Joe sat back down, mad that nobody paid attention to him.
OR
Joe was a good guy.
"I Liked the movie Dodgeball," he said.
Joe sat back down, mad that nobody paid attention to him.
PS: The Code will be used.
Hope to see you all like it. If you liked this one, I'm sure this next series will be good too (with some familiar faces).
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Helljumper
7:05 pm | July 10, 2004
I won't fill ya head up by telling you how great this series is,and how you came onto the site strong.
we should do a story together. wat u think?
ODST
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Ajax
5:02 pm | July 10, 2004
Good ending. The story was pretty compelling...it wasn't just blind action.
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masterchiefsdog
4:08 pm | July 10, 2004
This is a good series,comes up to comparison with pale horse and battle for the norah.
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Alox The Malox
4:03 pm | July 10, 2004
This was a great series. Story, characters, and suspense really made it good. Thanks for the great read.
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hunter_that_dances
3:12 pm | July 10, 2004
man, it sucked when you said that this was the end
THIS SERIES WAS G-R-E-A-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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russ687
2:24 pm | July 10, 2004
The much vaunted end of a story. If you see this going anywhere you may have a suspicion about this not really being the end.
Please post a comment and let me know about the entire series and how the story-line shaped up, etc.
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Spacefan
2:13 pm | July 10, 2004
Oh my goodness, I enjoyed that story. Sequel? Please?
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