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 Comments for 'The Fight for Bravo Base; pt. 3- Retaliation'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			FOrunnER  
3:14 am | September 17, 2003 
			Like I said on your last one, youre doing very well for a new writer. 9/10
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			Alpha Lance  
12:14 am | September 17, 2003 
			Yeah and also, great story, 9.8/10. Keep it up ese.
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			ONI_operative_343  
10:53 pm | September 16, 2003 
			the missing word at the bottom paragraph is vehicle. im sorry; i don't know how i forgot that one. 
  please, leave advice! its good to know that people read this!
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			Alpha Lance  
9:48 pm | September 16, 2003 
			What? I didn't cut it off. That doesn't sound right.
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			Louis Wu  
10:51 am | September 16, 2003 
			Admin note - it came like this; I didn't cut it off.
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