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 Comments for 'Closing with the Enemy Chapter 3 Death on the Front'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			monitor101  
5:57 pm | November 28, 2003 
			Thanks for the comments!
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			teemus  
3:33 pm | November 27, 2003 
			i really liked this seris it was well discribed. teh only thing is the ending seemed rushed
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			HunterKiller  
1:21 am | November 23, 2003 
			This is great material monitor keep it UP!
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			monitor101  
10:16 pm | November 21, 2003 
			Thanks for the comments keep them coming! Yah I will try and explain more next time.
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			Mainevent  
10:27 pm | November 20, 2003 
			I always liked your stories, well, most of them.  SO keep it up.
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			Agent Shade  
9:24 pm | November 19, 2003 
			this was very good, your writing has improved so much. the detail that i noticed allowed me to picture the battle happening in my mind. one little minor complaint, you somewhat rushed the pick up of the Pelicans...in the future, expand a little bit, talk more about carnage and fighting, it'll impress me at least lol cheers
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