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Comments for 'Before The Probe' |
Dispraiser
7:15 pm | September 18, 2003
No comment, but this one needed a lot of work... Work on everything, capitalization, perspectives, ect.
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Master_Chief189
6:07 pm | September 18, 2003
does anyone know a good siries
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Master_Chief189
5:56 pm | September 18, 2003
i meant to change it to 1st person
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Master_Chief189
5:54 pm | September 18, 2003
oops i meant to change that
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Sergeant B
9:48 am | September 18, 2003
A little confusing MC189. You change from 1st to 3rd persons all over. Check it, you'll see. You're like, "Ten grunts stepped in front of him and HE shot them down." Not I shot them down. But not much errors and a 9.2/10! Good Luck!
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