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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events - Sequel, Part One[FORUNNER]' |
CoLd BlooDed
5:41 pm | December 6, 2003
I'm finishing off my Fight for New Tatley chapter then I'm going to work on ASoWE for once. Then maybe another poem...lol
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Walker
1:25 pm | December 6, 2003
Wha? Oh, sorry. I thought I already reviewed this one. And I felt sorry for the guy; he wasn't getting any reviews. The writing in this one was fair, the spacing was a bit hard to cope with, but I like it. 8.7/10.
Semper Fi
-Walker
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FOrunnER
10:09 am | December 6, 2003
Thanx guys. The questiong mark thing was just some wierd typo error, I dunno.
CoLd BlooDed, you may or may not live depending on how good of a mood Im in the next time I post ;)
Walker, I can tolerate advertising for other stories, but if youre gonna post here can you at least give my story a review?
Anyway, thanx for commenting you guys. You may not see another story from me for a little while because Im a little rapped up in Halo: The First Strike, but I wont keep you guys waiting to long.
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SOS.Odin
11:26 pm | December 5, 2003
i thought it was quite good
the question marks were really annoying
but as said earlier im sure it was just a mistake
good job sure hope ya dont die
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Walker
10:02 pm | December 5, 2003
Read Jason's "The Twelve Days of Halo". It's pretty good, and I'm not really much of a fan of his work, so you can know I'm being completely honest--not that I'm not honest with people I like.
Semper Fi
-Walker
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hornet34
8:03 pm | December 5, 2003
Hmm, the question marks got a little annoying after a while, but I'm sure that was just a mistake. Pretty good, but you don't need to always state exactly how many troops are in each force and how many Covenant are attacking. If you are a little more vague, it is more realistic and gives you some freedom because you don't always have to account for every single soldier. Just a suggestion, keep up the good work.
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Blue Angel
7:43 pm | December 5, 2003
nice.:)
thats all i can say for now but nice:)
i havent been on for awhile, i mean thats what ya get for having low health. its kinda like halo, but real. hahahhaha cause you dont get now respawn.hhahaaha thats food for thought. nice:)
tah tah for now.:)
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CoLd BlooDed
4:05 pm | December 5, 2003
Pretty cool story, although I noticed that instead of quotations (") you used question marks instead lol.
I hope I make it through the head trauma, fractured bones and the bruises and cuts, but thats up to you ;).
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