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Comments for 'VENGEANCE [1]' |
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
i already have my idea for how he finds MC....
just wait.....
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Bean
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
oh goody...;P
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Jackal Jak
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
That was so....COOL!!!
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Ishkabibbl
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Different.
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Steele
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Did you have to put the title in all caps because some else had already written a story entitled 'Vengeance?'
'Cause, you know, I've written one by that title...
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GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
oh, you did? my bad. i usually do a search to see if im taking another title. the one time i dont, i end up stealing.
i hate fate.
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guy
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Kinda sounds like a bland rip off of Terminator.
And killing a roomful of 'boots it a little far fetched. Shot him thorugh the head and it entered the other guys stomach wow. All we need is anti gravity and a ship called the Nebbacanezer (Matrix people matrix)
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crashedwarthog
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
itz nebuchadnezzar:P
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crashedwarthog
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
itz nebuchadnezzar:P
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Kurt Cobain
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
It doesn't really matter, this is a cool series, and you should be talking about it, instaed of about Matrix. By the way, Gladiatrrr3000 you know who i am, Four Plagues!
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Sergeant B
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
COOL.
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LostRock
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
As Keanu Reeves would say...whoa. Bit of a random first chapter, but I hope you'll leak in more of what the hell is going on in this story as it continues.
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elfster
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
ok im not using any caps since im eating and typing at the same time but, lostrock, vengeance is a continuation of corrupt
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monitor101
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Sonufabitch I had the same idea but my story was going to be called Termination sweet ass story! 9/10 kinda short.
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GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
i wanna work on a marine named peters, but i wanna do more blood, so i do this one. what do you people want me to work on? peters or vengeance?
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Walker
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Eh... bring Peters to an end pretty soon. Meaning work on that first, then do this one, since Peters has been running for awhile. Damn, that 559 is a bastard. Killed the people who saved him. Kinda reminds me of Achilles from Card's Ender books. This was a good one, and I hope to see more...
The MC should have finished 559 off when he had the chance...
Semper Fi
-Walker
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Ishkabibbl
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Yeah the Ender's Game series is sweet, but for some reason I can't find The Memory of Earth at any libraries :-(
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Mainevent
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
I have one thing, kill 559 with a bullet to the forehead.......you can't, shoot him in the eye. The eye I tell you.
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Sim McGaulkin
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
The 559 has to be...
the most bastardly shithead ever.
Rip off his balls...
Or are they enhanced with steel too?
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Mainevent
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
You know, how could they be steel enhanced? if they are, do they make a clack clack clack sound when he runs?
that could be his "ominous warning sound"
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Walker
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
They can be melted. We can turn his balls into bullets.
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Mainevent
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
And then shoot him with them.
On his tomb it can read "Here lies 559, shot with his own balls which were melted down and turned to bullets."
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Mainevent
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
And then shoot him with them.
On his tomb it can read "Here lies 559, shot with his own balls which were melted down and turned to bullets."
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Walker
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
He doesn't deserve to be buried. I'd go for a burning at the stake.
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Master Chief
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Make me badder make me cooler make me make 599's ass more green then the money it costed to make my green ass.
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Alpha Lance
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
I didn't really read your series, but this one I got to read.
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