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 Comments for 'Halo: A Troubled Galaxy Ch. 4 (Final)'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Ghost  
12:00 am | January 1, 1970 
			Hey can you please rate my story. Thanks
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			Mainevent  
12:00 am | January 1, 1970 
			5-6/10
  Thin plot.-1
  Thin characters.-1
  Lack of detail.-1
  Good enough spelling.+1
  Good enough grammar.+1
  No pseudocode.-1
  You can make a logical progression of events in a moderate to easily readible format. +3 to 4
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			Ghost  
12:00 am | January 1, 1970 
			Sorry guys ive decided not to post a all in one of my story Sorry i have my reasons
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			ghost  
12:00 am | January 1, 1970 
			i hope you liked my story
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