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Comments for 'Halo: Infinity I: Arrival' |
The Collector
12:09 pm | March 23, 2004
Kewl ;p
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From author to collector
10:36 pm | March 21, 2004
To the Collector You think the sides are overbalanced for the humans, then you haven't seen what the covenant are gonna have
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The Collector
9:11 am | March 21, 2004
So how big is this ship it better be well over 10 miles to carry such heavy arsenals and Orbital class Defense Canons. 8 Supermacs!?! I wouldnt mind having that ship @ my disposal though. Overal the story isnt that bad. I dont know where your going with it yet but if u dont mind my sayin, dumb down the number of S-IIIs. Its good to have heavy handed ideas but i dont think u want to make the story one sided. Besides that great potential and good luck with that
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Helljumper
8:28 pm | March 10, 2004
Yea it was good, but u put too much on the Human ships. I mean 20 MAC canoons and like i forget how many super MACs, how does the UNSC go from like one on each ship to like 20. That ship must be like be like hundreds of kilometers long. And the Raven's are also too heavily armed.
ODST
First to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all
Feet first into Hell
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Awacar
1:59 pm | March 10, 2004
What I can say immediately is that you should do two things: Learn the pseduocode, and space your story out. That is the first step of making the majority of the HBO:ers reading your story. Ignore that, I think that this fanfic was rather good.
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